The History of Neon (part 1)

 Wow, I haven't posted anything here for months. Life took over for a while.

Anyways, I had a spark of inspiration while in the shower the other day, which produced this snippet. Hopefully more will come soon.

This story has been under development for over two years, but I never got farther than an outline. This is the first bit I actually got into writing. Hope you enjoy! :D


    The planet called Neon received its name from the purple glow of its atmosphere. For a long time humans did not go there because it was inhabited by aliens. But one day a man named Reaper gathered a group of followers to attempt to colonize Neon. They traveled to Neon in their spaceships and landed in a snowy wood. The aliens attacked them, but the humans with their advanced weapons prevailed over the aliens. Soon the humans conquered the entire planet, and the remaining aliens were hiding in caves. The humans then drew up a constitution and appointed Reaper to be their governor.

    Now Reaper proposed that they should hunt down and exterminate those aliens. But a man named Ristel spoke up. “Governor,” he said, “that will not be necessary. The aliens are afraid of our advanced weapons, and they will not dare to attack us. It would be more beneficial to domesticate them.”

    “The aliens may be afraid of us,” said Reaper, “but they will never love us. They will surely revolt when they get the opportunity.”

    “I had considered that,” said Ristel. “Allow me to experiment with a few of them. If the results are favorable, then perhaps we could force the aliens to work for us.”

    “Very well,” said Reaper. “But these aliens are intelligent. Do not underestimate them.”


Thanks for reading! If you have any thoughts, I'd love to hear them.

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